Insights archive

Red Pony is a team of writers, editors, Microsoft Office template developers and communications trainers. We have been writing about our areas of expertise for over a decade in our Red Pony Express newsletter.

This collection features the best articles from the last 10 years.

Grammar tips, Web writing McKinley Valentine Grammar tips, Web writing McKinley Valentine

Forensic linguists identify criminals by their writing style

The way you write – the length of your sentences, your use of punctuation, or your intractable belief that ‘professional’ should have two Fs in it – creates a linguistic ‘fingerprint’ that can be used to identify you. Forensic linguists have been tasked with examining blackmail letters, death threats, potentially faked suicide notes and even historical items, such as the famous ‘Bixby letter’, supposedly penned by Abraham Lincoln, but a matter of fierce debate.

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Editing, Plain English writing McKinley Valentine Editing, Plain English writing McKinley Valentine

Why simpler isn’t always clearer

A lot of our work at Red Pony involves simplifying technical language to make it accessible to a wider audience, who may not be familiar with industry terminology, be it government acronyms, financial jargon or technobabble. This is work I strongly believe in: if an idea has value, then it deserves to be understood by all of the people who might benefit from it.

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What I love about Red Pony clients

Earlier this month I was in Canberra for an Australian Government trade fair. Red Pony is a member of the government’s communications services panel, so I was there to meet people from the various departments and agencies who might engage our services. As I chatted to attendees, I began to reflect on the sales process for writing and editing services.

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Don’t lead your readers up the garden path

‘The government plans to raise taxes were defeated.’ Did you stumble over that sentence? If you’re like most people, you read ‘government’ as a noun and ‘plans’ as a verb, and when you got to ‘were defeated’, the sentence suddenly made no sense, and you had to go back and read it again.

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Editing Peter Riches Editing Peter Riches

Why I won’t be reading ‘Go Set a Watchman’

A little while back I was chatting to another dad at a children’s birthday party. He was telling me how he’d just bought a copy of Harper Lee’s new novel, Go Set a Watchman. Angelo talked of his anticipation of re-entering the fictional world of Maycomb County, having greatly enjoyed Harper Lee’s first and, until very recently, only published novel, To Kill a Mockingbird, as a teenager.

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Grammar tips, English language Belinda Nemec Grammar tips, English language Belinda Nemec

Barbarous mutilations

This brings us to the thorny matter of punctuation. All these abbreviations lost their full stop long ago. Even some relatively new ones, like app for application, are allowed to stand alone (and obviously, using full stops when tweeting and texting would defeat the purpose of the abbreviations that have developed, if u c wot I mean. But in formal text, what is the convention for punctuating words that still feel like abbreviations?

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Tendering Peter Riches Tendering Peter Riches

Are you tender-ready?

If you’ve ever responded to a request for tender (or RFT), you will know just how arduous the process can be. While the rewards for a successful submission are significant, the job of responding to a long list of complex requirements within a short timeframe puts many off before they start.

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